Very moving.
I love the story. I envisioned it perfectly in my head as the song played too. You've got great musical talent and know how to dig deep into a persons' emotions with each different instrument. If you live in New Jersey I'd be more than happy to help you make this epic song into some sort of action film along with S-Ops who can do the 3D stuff.
thank you! i love it to create stories, i also write but in italian for now. That's where i live XD
This is so relaxing!
Like someone below me posted, it's as if the sun is rising in the morning. Very smooth elegant clarinet and strings. I like the percussion instruments you added in there too. Awesome piece.
Thanks so much Shade, glad you enjoyed it!
Awesome track!
I like the slow gradual build up and the video game like sounds toward the middle, and the ending is so sick! I'm using this in one of my YouTube videos. I put the name of the song and your name so other people can check out your awesome music!
Ah, didn't see this review before I responded to your PM. Thanks a lot for using the song, it makes me really happy.
Also I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Stay tuned for more stuff in the future!
~TiGeR
Pretty cool.
It doesn't give me the impression of riding shotgun, or breaking into a bank. It reminds me of walking through a dark city alone with a bunch of people staring at you. That's what I get from it. Regardless it is still a nice piece of music.
I can deal with that too! :)
I'm sorry to here about your pop.
Excellent song. Keep up the great work.
:) Thanks for the condolences, Shade.
Awesome!
This is just what I need for a chase in one of my videos! I'll put your Newgrounds username at the end of the video. Thanks a bunch!
AWESOME! =D send me a link too! i wanna see the show / game =D
Hmmm. Too repetitive.
Would have been good if you went on earlier in the song. That loud guitar gets annoying.
Agreed and also this is the first attempt at learning the FL studio program so this isn't going to be my best work. Thanks for the review though.
Gotta love Jazz.
Cool little runs ya got in there. I'm in the Jazz Band at my school. If only our saxes would play solos like this. Only reason for eight of ten is because It's just a Saxaphone solo. Nothing else to it but drums and piano. Nice work.
Thanks for the good review, man. Yeah, the part about it being only a sax solo...that's kinda the point though. It's just me with a play-along cd. I hope to get some reviews about my playing specifically, because I don't have a private teacher and I want some objective listeners to give me some pointers on where I can improve as a sax player.
Thanks again.
Not bad.
It's a good tune and rhythm but, It is too repetitive. Add some other parts to the song. People don't want to hear the same four chords over and over. The piano part you have is great, all you need to do is add onto it with other rhythms, notes and chords.
yeah i know what you mean. i put it together in an hour or two. i'll work on it and put another version out soon
That song is copyrighted!
It is from RPG Maker 2003, the song is called Mechanical Fort!
((Called "Castle5" in 2k3))
I enjoy playing and listening to an ecclectic range of music. I've played trumpet since elementary school and self taught myself piano a bit. Here to write and enjoy the work of other artists.
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